【雅思】【写作】【大作文】Discuss both views and give your own opinion

?Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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?Discuss both views

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?Advantage

?The introduction

?Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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?Some people believe that in addition to teaching academic subjects, teachers should be responsible for students‘ moral education while others think teachers should not be responsible for this.

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?Main body 1

?On the one hand, there are sound (合理的，站得住脚的) reasons why some people hold the first point of view. Firstly, students spend most of their day time at school. This means that they pick up more thoughts about what is right and wrong from their teachers instead of from parents. Additionally, teachers usually have more influence on students and therefore they should be responsible for students’ moral education. For example: in teaching the importance of respecting the elderly, teachers’ words are generally more effective than the lectures given by parents. This is mainly because teachers have a natural authority over their pupils who are used to learn from them.

?Main body 2

?However, others may believe differently. While (虽然)  teachers are academically more authoritative, they sometimes hold different opinions in what is right and wrong from parents. A typical example is that many teachers emphasize the importance of rule obeying. However, some parents believe otherwise because they think rules restrict children from living up to their potentials or stifle creativity. As a result, it is better for the teachers to focus on teaching academic knowledge and leave the responsibility to parents.

?The Conclusion 1.

?In conclusion, teachers undoubtedly exert great influence on students simply because students spend more time at school. However, I still believe that teaching moral education should not be a necessary part of schooling considering the distinctions between different moral standards.

?The conclusion 2.

?My conclusion and own view is that teachers should teach their pupils about good qualities such as honesty, sympathy and trust, since these are essential for anyone in any society. However, when it comes to the more detailed issues, the job should be finished by the parents instead of by the teachers.

?The introduction

?Should museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge, even a voluntary charge, be levied for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.

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?One very complex issue in today’s society is the funding of museums and art galleries. Some say that they should be free of charge to the general public and funded by governments while others think they should charge an entrance fee like other attractions.

?Charge的用法

?A is free of charge. A免费。A是一项商品或服务.

?Eg: This water is free of charge. 

?A charge B. A是收钱的一方，B是付钱的一方.

?Eg: The restaurant charged me 20 yuan for this glass of water.

?A is charged. A是付钱的一方.

?Eg: I was charged for this glass of water.

?Main body 1.

?Advocates of the first idea may argue that museums and art galleries are public service institutions, which have been built with the money paid by tax-payers, therefore some believe that they should be free of charge to pay back the society. In addition, with no entrance fee, more citizens can be encouraged to learn about art and history. This means that arts are more available for the public, it is no longer something to be enjoyed by a privileged few.

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?Main body 2.

?However, others may believe otherwise. Firstly, museums and galleries indeed need funds to maintain management and update exhibitions. The support should come from visitors rather than governments since they do not have sufficient funds to subsidies all such institutions and there are other priorities for public money. In addition, museums and galleries need to charge a certain amount of fee to control the flow of visitors so that the risks of damaging the exhibitions will be reduced.

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?The conclusion

?In conclusion, it is true that the general public do need these educational institutions to be more available for the general public. However, they still should charge a reasonable amount of fee for managing purpose and for safety concern.

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?In conclusion, a possible compromise would be for the  museums and galleries to charge a reasonable amount of fee during peak seasons in order to maintain regular management and for safety concern. However, when it comes to off seasons, they should be opened free of charge to the public so that more visitors can access to art.

?The introduction

?Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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?A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population. While some people believe that increasing the number of sports center helps, I tend to agree with the others who believe that there are better approaches.

?Main body 1.

?Advocates (支持者) of the first side of opinion believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports center, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school  might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

?Lead a hectic lifestyle 

?Main body 2.

?However, there may be better way of tackling this problem. Interests in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. *Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

?The conclusion.

?As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

?In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

?The introduction

?Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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?We are inundated with various forms of advertisement in modern society. While some people believe that advertising is beneficial for the economy, I tend to agree with the others who criticize advertising for its negative social effects.

?Main body 1.

?There are sound reasons in favor of the first side of opinion. It is true that consumers are more likely to open their wallets and purchase under the influence of commercials. *Females and children are particularly affected because they are usually main targets of large manufacturers selling lucrative products like cosmetics or toys. *Advertisements also encourage consumption in a way that it indicates a certain type of lifestyle. *It is a common technic for luxury car producers to portray a successful business man driving one of their models outside of a country golfing clubs. *This would have the desired result that people will spend just to own the same life. 

?Main body 2.

?However, these commercials are also being criticized as they encourage consumers to spend unnecessarily. *When being influenced by pervasive advertisements, consumers become greedy and often confuse what they want with what they actually need. A typical example is the frenzy for lipsticks displayed by female consumers. They are flooded with various forms of commercial that appear on front pages of fashion magazines or on videos shot by popular vloggers, making them believe that they always needed the next lipstick.

?Main body 3.

?*Advertisements are also being blamed for making people feel insecure. Inferiority often arises when audiences watch super models posing in front of the cameras for handbags or dresses. As a result, many would pay for such handbags just to compensate for the feeling of inadequate.

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?Show off superiority

?The conclusion.

?In conclusion, as the main purpose of advertising has shifted from simply introducing features of a product to indicating a perfect lifestyle or a personal image, the influence is largely negative since pressure mounts as the audience watch these commercials. It is also essential for consumers to learn how to avoid the traps and spend rationally. 

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